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Gunshot Thought by ~Azrael3D:iconAzrael3D:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




~Gunshot Thought~

A gunshot thought
And my mind spills on paper.
Blue blood from my finger
Hands grey with matter.
I read the splatter
See my voice in horror.
Bloody poems
Read
Reveal what I've said
Deep within my head,
While the exiting wounds bled.
I'm as heavy as lead,
And my dreams are dead.
Without gasping a last breath,
My eyes roll back instead.

By: Sean O'Mara.
©2004-2008 ~Azrael3D
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Submitted: Dec 30, 2004
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One of those killer ideas

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~3ndlessSummer:icon3ndlessSummer: Dec 30, 2004, 1:23:05 PM
This is like one of the best poems about death i've ever read
~Azrael3D:iconAzrael3D: Dec 30, 2004, 1:26:41 PM
Wow thanks for saying so!

and cheers on the :+fav: !

-Az

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A man's home is his skull. -Sean O'Mara
~3ndlessSummer:icon3ndlessSummer: Dec 30, 2004, 1:58:24 PM
You're welcome! You're such an amazing poet
~axXxmadxXxworld:iconaxXxmadxXxworld: Dec 30, 2004, 2:19:21 PM
goodness your such a good poet! :+fav:

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conformity is the last refuge of the unimaginative.

Moony and Padfoot! Fighting apparitions one ghost at a time. You confuse them with long sentences, and while they are befuddled I slap them like a girl. What do you say? I think we've a career in it.
~Azrael3D:iconAzrael3D: Dec 30, 2004, 2:41:11 PM
How sweet! Thank you!

-Az

--
A man's home is his skull. -Sean O'Mara
~thylacine-girl:iconthylacine-girl: Dec 30, 2004, 7:47:37 PM
Excellent poem!!! :clap: :+favlove: Nice signature too....

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Always remember: you're unique, just like everybody else.
~axXxmadxXxworld:iconaxXxmadxXxworld: Dec 30, 2004, 8:06:32 PM
no problem!

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conformity is the last refuge of the unimaginative.

Moony and Padfoot! Fighting apparitions one ghost at a time. You confuse them with long sentences, and while they are befuddled I slap them like a girl. What do you say? I think we've a career in it.
~Azrael3D:iconAzrael3D: Dec 30, 2004, 10:47:11 PM
Thanks so much for saying so!
Your signature isn't too bad either!

Also, Cheers on the :+fav: !

-Az

--
A man's home is his skull. -Sean O'Mara
~periaria:iconperiaria: Dec 30, 2004, 11:52:14 PM
incredible as usual... *shakes head in amazement* :)

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we are all dreams in the void and everything we imagine is real.
~a.a. attanasio
~Azrael3D:iconAzrael3D: Dec 30, 2004, 11:56:10 PM
Thank you for saying so Periaria!

-Az

--
A man's home is his skull. -Sean O'Mara
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